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The Megal
Joined: 16 Apr 2010
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Location: The Twilight Zone
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 Posted: Tue May 25, 2010 11:08 pm Post subject: Pulled by the Wind (Criticism Anyone?) |
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What do you think of it? Could you tell me what I could have done better? What do you think of the concept?[/img]
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darklite
Joined: 19 Dec 2009
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Location: Oregon, U.S.
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I like the concept a lot, but it almost looks as if she's floating and not moving with the wind. I think it's the blurring around her head and body, and the fact that her dress is blowing in an upward direction and not behind her. Her hair is also blowing upward-against the wind. It's a very interesting piece though.
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Patrick
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Location: Harbinger, NC, U.S.A.
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Auieos
Joined: 29 Jan 2010
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Great concept. I would prefer it to be more Disney like and less grim, but that's a personal thing.
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jk3000
Joined: 16 Apr 2009
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I would add more detail to the umbrella and a little less blur; just on the umbrella.
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