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The Megal

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PostPosted: Tue May 25, 2010 11:08 pm    Post subject: Pulled by the Wind (Criticism Anyone?) Reply with quote

What do you think of it? Could you tell me what I could have done better? What do you think of the concept?[/img]


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darklite

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PostPosted: Wed May 26, 2010 5:35 am    Post subject: Reply with quote

I like the concept a lot, but it almost looks as if she's floating and not moving with the wind. I think it's the blurring around her head and body, and the fact that her dress is blowing in an upward direction and not behind her. Her hair is also blowing upward-against the wind. It's a very interesting piece though.
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PostPosted: Wed May 26, 2010 2:00 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

darklite makes some interesting points. Like him, I think it's an interesting concept, though. Maybe the fingerlike things could be a little more transparent.

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PostPosted: Wed May 26, 2010 6:10 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

Great concept. I would prefer it to be more Disney like and less grim, but that's a personal thing.
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PostPosted: Tue Jun 08, 2010 1:36 am    Post subject: Reply with quote

I would add more detail to the umbrella and a little less blur; just on the umbrella.
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