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FotoChopper
Joined: 16 Jul 2011
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Posted: Sat Jul 16, 2011 9:30 pm Post subject: MY FIRST ATTEMPT with CS5 |
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I have just started getting back into photoshop since awhile ago but never really took the time to learn much about it.
I enjoy making movies and I decided to give photoshop a try to make the poster/movie cover page...
Any critisisms would be great, I need to know where to improve
heres what I came up with,
And heres the original for a reference,
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thehermit
Joined: 05 Mar 2003
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Location: Cheltenham, UK
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Posted: Sun Jul 17, 2011 7:19 am Post subject: |
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Hi FotoChopper welcome to the forum.
You have captured the feel of a movie poster and the nice change in tone to make it more 'Afghanistan' in flavour is a good choice. The font for the 'SEALS' is a good choice but the font choice at the bottom would be more believable if you used the proper Movie Poster Font _________________ If life serves you lemons, make lemonade! |
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Patrick
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Location: Harbinger, NC, U.S.A.
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jacvio
Joined: 16 Jun 2011
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Posted: Mon Aug 08, 2011 2:02 pm Post subject: |
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Photoshoprint
Joined: 15 Aug 2011
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Location: Romania
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Posted: Tue Aug 16, 2011 11:30 am Post subject: |
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Nice cover for a first attempt. You could darken the edges to give the photo a little bit more of a drama _________________ Photoshoprint | Photoshop Tutorials for Print-Ready Designs |
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jerryb4417
Joined: 20 Dec 2008
Posts: 710
Location: Oklahoma PS Version: photoshop cs5 OS: win7 pro 64 bit, i7-3.2g, GTS 450,
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Posted: Tue Aug 16, 2011 4:46 pm Post subject: |
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hi,
my 2 cents worth....
i agree with the other i like it. you did a good job with the composit and it matches nicely...
the only thing i caught
1. i thought maybe that sun in the upper left corner could be work on .....maybe just me but i thought i would expect to see a little more of the ridge... up there....
2. also your composit look like there light comming from two directions... look on the right side of the background mountain range, it appears there might be a sun there also.. smiling ... maybe darken that are a little bit ... |
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hytham
Joined: 17 Nov 2011
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Posted: Mon Nov 28, 2011 9:17 pm Post subject: |
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I like how you made "sunny" effect on the pic..
well done |
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Skyhawk
Joined: 28 Oct 2011
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Location: New York City, USA
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Posted: Wed Nov 30, 2011 8:43 am Post subject: |
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It looks cool and all, the tone is great but the fonts don't match that well for a movie poster. _________________ Adopt a stray or shelter animal and save a life |
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Auieos
Joined: 29 Jan 2010
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Posted: Thu Dec 01, 2011 4:46 pm Post subject: |
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Great job |
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thehermit
Joined: 05 Mar 2003
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Location: Cheltenham, UK
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Posted: Fri Dec 02, 2011 4:40 am Post subject: |
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on reviving old threads :p _________________ If life serves you lemons, make lemonade! |
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