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Skyhawk
Joined: 28 Oct 2011
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Location: New York City, USA
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 Posted: Fri Nov 18, 2011 12:22 pm Post subject: Get out your color pencil |
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Just learning here, what do ya think?
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Auieos
Joined: 29 Jan 2010
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Good idea combining real with drawing to create contrast.
Probably a bit to much detail with some of the edges in the face make it look noisy.
Apart from that its looking good.
Have you seen this? http://www.alienskin.com/snapart/
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jerryb4417
Joined: 20 Dec 2008
Posts: 710
Location: Oklahoma
PS Version: photoshop cs5
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| Posted: Sun Nov 20, 2011 7:17 pm Post subject: |
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hi,
overall I like it... a nice idea,,
pretty good job on converting the image to line art... just minor negatives.
1. got alittle wild in getting yellow in the hair.. smiling...
2. there two things that seems to me to be very distracting...
a. the nostrils... smiling... there dominating... when you first look at the image those nostrials just pulls your eyes to them.... i would maybe minimize or eliminate....
b. the lips ... i don't knowhow todiscribe but the lips don't lookrightlook like there a hole in them ...
butlike isaid i like your work
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Skyhawk
Joined: 28 Oct 2011
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Location: New York City, USA
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Thank you both for your comments I’m glad you like the overall concept. I saw this done several times online and figured I’d take a stab at it.
Auieos, more noise… no problem buddy, noise it is.
Jerry, I agree with you in that the nostrils are a bit overbearing and you can rest assured that I will work on softening them somewhat. The lips on the other hand what you see as a hole is really lip gloss but remember that the hand hasn’t finished yet, he’ll eventually get around to making it look real.
Great comments thanks again! 
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jerryb4417
Joined: 20 Dec 2008
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hi
ok on the lips... smiling.... i can see your having fun with it
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iloveprint
Joined: 12 Jan 2012
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| Posted: Mon Feb 27, 2012 4:29 am Post subject: Re: Get out your color pencil |
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The hand seems a little out of focus, but I love the shadow underneath it! My only other critique would be that the placement of the text/font seems a bit awkward. The overall concept is really great, though. Thanks for sharing!
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Netaddict
Joined: 16 Feb 2011
Posts: 332
Location: Earth
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It looks great! Only oe improvements:
Instead of the hand covering up a reasonable portion of the image, why not put the hand at the bottom right where the signature is, as if the hand has finished drawing and is signing
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hytham
Joined: 17 Nov 2011
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Great work..but i agree with the point of nose..it's need to be modified...and i think lips need to be less glossy..
I like it..keep it up
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darklite
Joined: 19 Dec 2009
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Location: Oregon, U.S.
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This is beautiful. The nose and mouth don't bother me, but look great. However, simple toning with some light gray, or relevant colors will take away the impact of the stark white of the nostrils and the inside of the mouth. I think her lips should definitely be glossy, no problem there. She's glamorous.
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