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lasa

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PostPosted: Sun Jul 09, 2006 6:52 am    Post subject: Reply with quote

I think the over all design isn't bad it just missing some "pop"..
The text is hard to read because it meshes to much with the backgoround.
The site reminds me of a flyer...I'd take advantage of all the tools in hand.

I cut the site up and simply put it back with shadows and gradients..
Is it better?... probably not but maybe it will spark some ideas.

Good luck,
Lasa



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expinch

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PostPosted: Thu Jul 13, 2006 8:54 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

OK all. Here is my 2nd try and I've tried to add some depth and use color suggestions. I went a little loopy on this one so fire away.


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PostPosted: Fri Jul 14, 2006 6:25 am    Post subject: Reply with quote

much much better, the colors work well together and add to the "Style" you're trying to achieve. You have the depth and various little details that work towards the overall effect. *Claps*
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PostPosted: Fri Jul 14, 2006 9:11 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

i think your halfway there. deffinettly on the right track. but it still needs somthing to pull you in. push it untill youhave gone to far, then pull it back. then your there.
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expinch

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PostPosted: Sat Jul 15, 2006 4:43 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

Thanks guys. malcon, could you be a little more specifc, or provide an example of something that 'pulls you in'? Are you talking about graphics?
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malcon

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PostPosted: Sat Jul 15, 2006 10:26 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

its the same thing i said before. you added some shadows etc. but i just think you should do more of what you did. maybe up the shadow. no doubt it looks awesome. i love the changes but i think you could add a little more depth to it. similar to what Lasa did.
your deffinatly on the right track man! keep it up. and keep us posted as always

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