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lasa
Joined: 08 Aug 2005
Posts: 1090
Location: Florida
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I think the over all design isn't bad it just missing some "pop"..
The text is hard to read because it meshes to much with the backgoround.
The site reminds me of a flyer...I'd take advantage of all the tools in hand.
I cut the site up and simply put it back with shadows and gradients..
Is it better?... probably not but maybe it will spark some ideas.
Good luck,
Lasa
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expinch
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OK all. Here is my 2nd try and I've tried to add some depth and use color suggestions. I went a little loopy on this one so fire away.
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Haunus
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much much better, the colors work well together and add to the "Style" you're trying to achieve. You have the depth and various little details that work towards the overall effect. *Claps*
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malcon
Joined: 23 Feb 2005
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Location: miami florida
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expinch
Joined: 23 Mar 2004
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Thanks guys. malcon, could you be a little more specifc, or provide an example of something that 'pulls you in'? Are you talking about graphics?
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malcon
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