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Gallo_Pinto
Joined: 15 Jul 2005
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That is WAY better.
and the logo could be just a tiny little bit more visible. Doesn't need to be exactly "obvious" in my opinion. As ted said, you're the artist.
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helcyon
Joined: 02 Oct 2005
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ok so i think this is really close to its final version. I added the radial blur to the tire, straightened car, changed some of the lines giving motion, rounded the corners on some othe design elements, used overlapping to give a 3-d feel, and changed the typography to incorporate it more into the design. I did also decide to increase the opacity on the logo, the straigt line in the logo adds to the motion of the design. Also, once again, let me know what you all think, good or bad, since this is for criticism.
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helcyon
Joined: 02 Oct 2005
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oh and here it is on a billboard if u like those shots...
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teddc
Joined: 04 Oct 2004
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Location: Belmont North Australia
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Improving!!
What are you advertising??? BARRIER or SCION.
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helcyon
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im advertising the scion obviously... but i think i know what your getting at. the focal point is the word, "barrier." Your eye jumps right to that word. The model and make of the car is readable, but does not jump out at you like the word barrier. Maybe I will use something other than white for the font color. I might also change the colors a little bit on the bottom to provide a little more contrast with the words. |
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teddc
Joined: 04 Oct 2004
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I'd try that. My eye went to 'barrier'.
If I was driving past the billboard I wouldn't have had time to take in the cars name. These type of ads have to be subliminal.
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helcyon
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ok so here is the final version and this is what I'm turning in. The teacher and classmates liked it. The teacher said he wants to add it to his student work portfolio, so thats cool...
anyway here it is.
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teddc
Joined: 04 Oct 2004
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Now that looks kool
good luck!!!
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Moi
Joined: 21 Mar 2005
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lol yeah it looks very cool!
teddc, did you know that in my language(dutch) "kool" means cabbage?  |
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teddc
Joined: 04 Oct 2004
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LOL 
What!!! Kool, Kol, Cos.
Thanks for sharing that Moi
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