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malcon

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PostPosted: Sun Aug 28, 2005 10:40 pm    Post subject: drummer! Reply with quote

hey this is a picture i was working on tonight. its all free hand. but ive never been that great a figures. and i found it had to get the reflections off the drum stands and what not. any advise?


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Brooksi

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PostPosted: Tue Aug 30, 2005 1:40 am    Post subject: Rating,. Reply with quote

Looks good dude, but i wouldnt have blue text in the background, perhaps red so it matches other colours
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PostPosted: Tue Aug 30, 2005 1:42 am    Post subject: Reply with quote

Great work if its done form freehand, ive just bought a wacom graphire 3 studio tablet so i can get better at that but the text is not very good, i think it ruins it, i think its pointless making half freehand and half font for that kind of image
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BryanDowning

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PostPosted: Tue Aug 30, 2005 5:11 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

I agree about the text not looking agreeable. Also the glares on the symbol and drum look too defined.

I think you should maybe work in a setting. Put him in a coffee shop or on a stage or a garage or something. Maybe you could work in a piece of band scenery with the words you want - like a backdrop.

Also you spelled "dedication" wrong.

Looks excellent though. I like the reflection of the drum on the under side of the symbol. Keep it up.

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cyborg

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PostPosted: Wed Aug 31, 2005 2:44 am    Post subject: Reply with quote

change the text color and its perfect....dont worry about the reflections...it looks good....red text would probably looks better.
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PostPosted: Wed Aug 31, 2005 10:23 am    Post subject: Reply with quote

Nice! You're having fun with that Cintiq tablet, I see. Big Grin

Being a percussionist myself, I enjoyed that image. The guy's expression is a little funny; you might want to work on the clarity of his expression a bit. The reflections on the instruments are very well executed. I'm around drums all the time, so I have a pretty good feel for how they look. I agree that a different setting might be nice. If not, perhaps slightly brighter and/or reddish text. In any case, it's looking great. Keep it up.

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malcon

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PostPosted: Wed Aug 31, 2005 7:25 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

awesome. ill make some changes and post the changes. but yeah, the expression is sorta strange but i like it for some reason. uhmm yeah i wasnt sure about the text it was just something i thought about . but yeah i like the blank back ground. i will try diferent tones or lighting it up some. but yeah keep the comments comming. i really appreciate the advice.

PS: what type of percussionist are you? drumset, rudamental, keyboards? or just all around. thats cool though man
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malcon

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PostPosted: Wed Aug 31, 2005 7:46 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

ok i took the text out and tried some lighting stuff. anyway. i like it better but i still dont want to put like a real background behind it. i thought about maybe hinting at a crowd or somthing. but that just seems a little hokey


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PostPosted: Thu Sep 01, 2005 5:02 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

Looks much better to me.
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PostPosted: Fri Sep 02, 2005 2:05 am    Post subject: Reply with quote

awesome. i do to. i guess it was late when i put the text on there because now i hate the text. anyway thanks for the advice. this place is nice
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