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malcon
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Posted: Sun Aug 28, 2005 10:40 pm Post subject: drummer! |
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hey this is a picture i was working on tonight. its all free hand. but ive never been that great a figures. and i found it had to get the reflections off the drum stands and what not. any advise?
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Brooksi

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Posted: Tue Aug 30, 2005 1:40 am Post subject: Rating,. |
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Looks good dude, but i wouldnt have blue text in the background, perhaps red so it matches other colours
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Posted: Tue Aug 30, 2005 1:42 am Post subject: |
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Great work if its done form freehand, ive just bought a wacom graphire 3 studio tablet so i can get better at that but the text is not very good, i think it ruins it, i think its pointless making half freehand and half font for that kind of image
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BryanDowning

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Posted: Tue Aug 30, 2005 5:11 pm Post subject: |
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I agree about the text not looking agreeable. Also the glares on the symbol and drum look too defined.
I think you should maybe work in a setting. Put him in a coffee shop or on a stage or a garage or something. Maybe you could work in a piece of band scenery with the words you want - like a backdrop.
Also you spelled "dedication" wrong.
Looks excellent though. I like the reflection of the drum on the under side of the symbol. Keep it up.
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cyborg
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Posted: Wed Aug 31, 2005 2:44 am Post subject: |
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change the text color and its perfect....dont worry about the reflections...it looks good....red text would probably looks better.
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Datameister

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Posted: Wed Aug 31, 2005 10:23 am Post subject: |
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Nice! You're having fun with that Cintiq tablet, I see.
Being a percussionist myself, I enjoyed that image. The guy's expression is a little funny; you might want to work on the clarity of his expression a bit. The reflections on the instruments are very well executed. I'm around drums all the time, so I have a pretty good feel for how they look. I agree that a different setting might be nice. If not, perhaps slightly brighter and/or reddish text. In any case, it's looking great. Keep it up.
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malcon
Joined: 23 Feb 2005
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Posted: Wed Aug 31, 2005 7:25 pm Post subject: |
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awesome. ill make some changes and post the changes. but yeah, the expression is sorta strange but i like it for some reason. uhmm yeah i wasnt sure about the text it was just something i thought about . but yeah i like the blank back ground. i will try diferent tones or lighting it up some. but yeah keep the comments comming. i really appreciate the advice.
PS: what type of percussionist are you? drumset, rudamental, keyboards? or just all around. thats cool though man
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malcon
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Posted: Wed Aug 31, 2005 7:46 pm Post subject: |
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ok i took the text out and tried some lighting stuff. anyway. i like it better but i still dont want to put like a real background behind it. i thought about maybe hinting at a crowd or somthing. but that just seems a little hokey
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BryanDowning

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Posted: Thu Sep 01, 2005 5:02 pm Post subject: |
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Looks much better to me.
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malcon
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