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Hasty
Joined: 02 Jun 2005
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Location: Leicester, England
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 Posted: Thu Jun 02, 2005 12:50 pm Post subject: Mario (Music) Cd cover |
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thought i'd keep it simple, just made his skin smoothish and change his eye color.
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Haunus
Joined: 24 Nov 2004
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do you have an original to compare it against...
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Xopods
Joined: 19 Apr 2005
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Location: Montreal, Quebec
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| Posted: Fri Jun 03, 2005 6:41 am Post subject: |
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Because both his face and the text are on the left, the whole design feels like it's leaning that way. The inclination of his head doesn't help, either. Either move the text to the bottom right corner or add some element of visual interest to the right side.
Notice how, right now, the very first thing the eye goes to, even before his face, is the parental advisory in the top right. This is because it's a small, but strong graphic element in an otherwise empty area of the layout. You want to use that effect to your advantage, rather than have it bring unwanted attention to a legally-mandated warning that should be tucked away somewhere less noticeable.
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Hasty
Joined: 02 Jun 2005
Posts: 9
Location: Leicester, England
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| Posted: Sat Jun 04, 2005 3:58 pm Post subject: |
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Okie thanks for the feedback
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