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def1

Joined: 30 Apr 2005
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PostPosted: Sun May 01, 2005 1:26 am    Post subject: New WEBSITE for web design Reply with quote

www.visualconception.bravehost.com

check it out, tell me what you think...i tried to keep it simple and was kind of in a rush to finish it
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witam

Joined: 27 Oct 2004
Posts: 812
Location: Belgium


PostPosted: Sun May 01, 2005 2:14 am    Post subject: okay Reply with quote

I looked at your first page, the one people see when they get on your site and this is the result:

Everything in red is something i (me personally) don't like.

First of all the title of your page is a psd.. not really catching title.

You have ads on your page which i have something against (but this is really personal).

I needed some additional plugins to get hte full experience, chances are a lot of people won't have it.. it's disturbing to get error messages when you look at a page to promote them designing your page.

The background is white and the image is not centered on your page. I don't think white suits your image and it's should be centered.. looks neater.

I don't like the border around the link-part.. just put enter somewhere and they'll click that, without having this border destroy the look of your image.

The sign below your name of the company looks pixelated or something. It isn't smooth anyway, so that doesn't give a good idea about your skills. You need eyecatching, finished look for that sign.

Personally i don't like your choice of fontsize.. far too big and not fitting with the rest of the page.

My five cents..



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def1

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PostPosted: Sun May 01, 2005 1:52 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

truth....thanks for the info...like i said kind of rushed jsut to get the website up and running so all the detials will be added soon
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witam

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PostPosted: Sun May 01, 2005 2:51 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

i hope it helps you and we get to see the finished result. :-)
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def1

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PostPosted: Sun May 01, 2005 3:14 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

yea now that i have the basic foundation for the site you will see many changes, which i hope you like...thanks for feed...also do you know anywhere, where i can get some customers???
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thehermit

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PostPosted: Tue May 03, 2005 7:33 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

To be honest I could soft soap you and play you along, but sometimes a good dose of reality is better than stoking someone's ego. If you are planning on designing peoples website's you should really learn basic HTML before trying to get to grips with other languages like CSS, PHP, C++ etc.....

If you really want a realistic critique and you won't get offended by my response I would welcome the opportunity to give some detailed responses, I just don't want to offend.

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def1

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PostPosted: Wed May 04, 2005 5:07 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

seriously i wont get offended honestly, like i said i just made this for a foundation i have yet to mkae it how i want it...and I do know html
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ZiN

Joined: 19 Jan 2005
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PostPosted: Sat May 07, 2005 3:46 am    Post subject: Reply with quote

you need some more pratice, before you can sell work,
im not saying its ugly, but is bad, i
m not saying your not good, but not good enough,
pratice will always help,
and chrage when thae demand is high also if they're all asking u, otherwise do wat im doing,
doing it for free and self-promoting my company,
meaning it will spread by word of mouth,
it may take time, but in that period of time you will get much better

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def1

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PostPosted: Sat May 07, 2005 1:39 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

there i re-did the first page now I'm moving on, tell me what you think now

http://visualconception.bravehost.com/visualconcepts.html
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def1

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PostPosted: Sun May 08, 2005 12:06 am    Post subject: Reply with quote

all pages redone
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