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Location: Cheltenham, UK
Posted: Sun May 08, 2005 5:43 pm Post subject:
I think you may have unrealistic expectations for your experience in the design field at this time. Perhaps refining your skills somemore and then releasing yourself onto the design world, would be better. _________________ If life serves you lemons, make lemonade!
whats wrong with it seriously i got to know, all your saying is i need to practice more but umm on what specifically, I know the site is simple but you really dont know if I can or can not do web design, I mean I kept it simple because thats how I like things but if someone else wanted it different and more complex i can do it...that all Im saying
whats wrong with it seriously i got to know, all your saying is i need to practice more but umm on what specifically, I know the site is simple but you really dont know if I can or can not do web design, I mean I kept it simple because thats how I like things but if someone else wanted it different and more complex i can do it...that all Im saying
honestly, its too "noob" becuase man, i dont know where to start, here's one of my first sites i've done www.soalcreations.com thats like my second layout i ever did, im working on a third one http://www.soalcreations.com/index.jpg and certainly these are very simple, i guess your is just too simple, seems like u got lazy _________________ >img resizemod="on" onload="rmw_img_loaded(this)" src="http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v25/mR_hA/banners/lpzin.jpg">
You may know everything on photoshop, but without ideas or creativty, theres no point in using it. - ZiN
well yea i guess you can say i got lazy and I know its simple but like i said thats how i like things simple Im working on a layout as of right now maybe it will change your minds on things
Simple can be good, if you make it count. Here however are still some little things that make me realise you're not experience. (it might be you are, but it doesn't show)
The pic is not centered so you have a lot of white space.
The background is white, which really doesn't fit with your image. Make the entire page a whole.
Loose the advertising on top. It takes up half of the screen and destroys credibility.
Your title, menu and text are on different backgrounds, which is not the problem.. they don't fit together.. make it a whole, a pleasing whole to look at. Show off your design skills.
Also the counter.. it's too obvious, besides 34 visitors don't give a good impression.
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