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rossi22
Joined: 28 Sep 2012
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 Posted: Fri Sep 28, 2012 6:08 am Post subject: Please give your opinion about this brochure I've made |
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Hello dear all,
I'm a newbie in graphic design. Now I should make a brochure for private football field which is my own.
I would like kindly to ask to give your opinion about my design.
Thank you very much in advanced
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thehermit
Joined: 05 Mar 2003
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Location: Cheltenham, UK
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Welcome to the forum rossi22. It may help out critique if you could post a larger image. This forum allows up to 200k and you could host it somewhere else if you need a larger size.
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rossi22
Joined: 28 Sep 2012
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username18052
Joined: 25 Oct 2010
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The white banner is very distracting. Change the text color to black or stroke it (inside) in black as white text.
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