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SteelSphere
Joined: 30 Dec 2004
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 Posted: Thu Dec 30, 2004 9:51 pm Post subject: The Last Samurai (I'm New) |
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Hi everyone I'm new here and this is my first post. For my first post I wanted to showcase a design that I made today for you all to rate. Thanks for your time and I don't mind if you say it's bad as long as you tell me how to improve!
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BryanDowning
Joined: 05 Jul 2004
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Location: California, USA
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7/10
I don't like how Tom Cruise is in there twice, and the type looks out of place. Cool images though.
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SteelSphere
Joined: 30 Dec 2004
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Thanks, I really need to fix the type then. I'll need to work on this a little more and I'll show you the second version. Thanks for your time
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SteelSphere
Joined: 30 Dec 2004
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| Posted: Fri Dec 31, 2004 9:36 pm Post subject: |
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here's the new one
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Brad
Joined: 13 Dec 2004
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Location: AL
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Its nice, 7/10 also. It COULD flow across a little better, and have the old guy that was his body guard in it.
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