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ELECTRIClTY
Joined: 08 Jul 2012
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 Posted: Sun Jul 08, 2012 1:18 pm Post subject: Portfolio feedback please :) |
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I have a website that I recently made with all of my stuff on it so instead of having to upload all of my pictures here, just go to the link below and tell me what you think. You can comment there or here. I don't really care. Thanks!
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thehermit
Joined: 05 Mar 2003
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Location: Cheltenham, UK
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I won't lie but I wont be too harsh either. Everything is a little 'tutorialised' at the moment, it's not a bad thing as we all learnt from the fundamentals like on-line tutorials at some time. I would advise the next step, to take those techniques you have learnt and develop them into your own particular visions.
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Patrick
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Location: Harbinger, NC, U.S.A.
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SSO
Joined: 26 Jun 2012
Posts: 105
Location: Denmark
PS Version: CS5
OS: Mac OS X
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| thehermit wrote: | | I won't lie but I wont be too harsh either. Everything is a little 'tutorialised' at the moment, it's not a bad thing as we all learnt from the fundamentals like on-line tutorials at some time. I would advise the next step, to take those techniques you have learnt and develop them into your own particular visions. |
As said, it looks very 'tutorialized' and the front page of your blog with the 'ELECTRICITY' header expresses what I think is, as mentioned, a bit tutorialized, but also in a way very un-finished. It needs a lot more of your own unique specimen. The header would be a start, because the only thing you see is the ELECTRICITY text, that has been through some lightning-effects, but nothing else. It needs more depth, detail and 'excitement'!
This, I think, is a more or less general thing that can be put on most of he works you have posted. Great potential, but far from finished!
I hope this made sense. Good luck!
//SSO
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