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HowitsDone101
Joined: 25 Apr 2012
Posts: 9
Location: United States
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 Posted: Tue May 08, 2012 3:58 pm Post subject: Looking for feedback |
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I'm doing a parody of Tosh.0. As you can see, I took Tosh.0 and spraypainted a J over it so its Josh.0.
Please let me what you think of it, and if you think I could improve anywhere, please be sure to mention that too. Any and all feedback is appreciated.
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Patrick
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Joined: 14 Feb 2003
Posts: 11945
Location: Harbinger, NC, U.S.A.
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K-touch
Joined: 17 Jan 2010
Posts: 166
Location: Sydney, Australia.
PS Version: CS, CS2, CS3, CS4
OS: Mac OS X, Win Xp
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| Posted: Sat Jun 09, 2012 7:06 am Post subject: Re: Looking for feedback |
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Hi there,
the design is good, but try to get rid of the white line behind the letter "J"
cheers
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oxonium
Joined: 13 Jun 2012
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| Posted: Wed Jun 13, 2012 10:43 am Post subject: White lines |
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There are currently white lines around the edges of your spray cans it might integrate better if you removed the white edges. Also try and blur the hard edges out slightly but do it very subtly.
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iloveprint
Joined: 12 Jan 2012
Posts: 34
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The design looks good. With the white uncovered part of the letter, I know your painting or conceptualizing the action or process involved in your design. Unfortunately, it didn't work that way. Maybe you can show more of the white part so it becomes obvious and won't seem like a mess. |
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