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Karl
Joined: 31 Mar 2012
Posts: 5
Location: Liverpool
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 Posted: Sat Mar 31, 2012 8:12 am Post subject: My First Desktop Background. |
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This is a desktop background i made in photoshop CS5.1 i used the cloud render to overlay 3 blue dots to make the background and the smoke effect that you can see over everything in the background i would like your feedback on improvements.
P.S. The text was made in C4D by the way 
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Auieos
Joined: 29 Jan 2010
Posts: 2019
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| Posted: Sat Mar 31, 2012 11:30 pm Post subject: |
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Looks great, not sure how you can improve it.
Maybe the lighting, the spiral twist doesn't light up the letters.
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jerryb4417
Joined: 20 Dec 2008
Posts: 710
Location: Oklahoma
PS Version: photoshop cs5
OS: win7 pro 64 bit, i7-3.2g, GTS 450,
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| Posted: Sun Apr 01, 2012 6:08 pm Post subject: |
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hi,
overall i like it....
auieos-- good catch
another sort of minor is the letters themselves , the 3d effect ..
I have uploaded a image to point areas i ref...
at the foot of the letters the perspective appears to be opposite, like going down....
when you look at other parts.. elongated part appears to being going up..
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