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Phenom408

Joined: 20 Mar 2012
Posts: 4



PostPosted: Thu Mar 22, 2012 12:26 am    Post subject: Critique Needed! Reply with quote

Hello, I just recently (two days ago) started teaching myself (using google) to use photoshop! This is my first piece any critique would be helpful thanks!

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thehermit

Joined: 05 Mar 2003
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Location: Cheltenham, UK


PostPosted: Thu Mar 22, 2012 7:22 am    Post subject: Reply with quote

Not really a big fan of the typography/font and also there is too much noise for my taste.
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jerryb4417

Joined: 20 Dec 2008
Posts: 710
Location: Oklahoma
PS Version: photoshop cs5
OS: win7 pro 64 bit, i7-3.2g, GTS 450,

PostPosted: Thu Mar 22, 2012 9:08 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

hi,
I agree with thehermit. too much noise...
other things that didn't suite my taste...

a. that partials reflection of the moon to me distracts...
b. the eagle... you have duo tone color eagle
and to me it doesn work well with the rest of the image which is multitone..
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Greg79

Joined: 23 Mar 2012
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PostPosted: Sat Mar 24, 2012 6:09 am    Post subject: Reply with quote

I agree with the others, but I find the moon behind the trees really cool!
This part of the design is really nice.

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renata

Joined: 26 Nov 2010
Posts: 368
Location: Australia


PostPosted: Mon Mar 26, 2012 1:18 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

Nice colors, nice idea. You're obviously getting the hang of layers, good work!

If you enjoy making composites, did you know that you can get reasonable quality photos from free stock sites, such as:
http://www.sxc.hu/

Keep it up!
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Karl

Joined: 31 Mar 2012
Posts: 5
Location: Liverpool


PostPosted: Sat Mar 31, 2012 8:02 am    Post subject: Change the font and colour Reply with quote

Just after a quick look at the picture you do have potential of creating pictures in Photoshop but you will need to learn how to add text effects and learn a few fonts that will suit the picture after a bit of practise this is easier to do and colour correction might be needed in that picture way to many effects slightly blury....
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gohan2091

Joined: 20 Apr 2012
Posts: 56
Location: England


PostPosted: Fri Apr 20, 2012 6:54 am    Post subject: Reply with quote

I dislike the font used in the text, I also feel the image needs some serious noise reduction. Other than that, not bad!
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