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AzrexDesign
Joined: 30 Nov 2011
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Location: Stoke-on-trent , UK
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thehermit
Joined: 05 Mar 2003
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Location: Cheltenham, UK
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Looks nice, although the fact that you are making me use an extra mouse click would annoy me.
Welcome to the forum AzrexDesign.
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AzrexDesign
Joined: 30 Nov 2011
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Location: Stoke-on-trent , UK
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| thehermit wrote: | Looks nice, although the fact that you are making me use an extra mouse click would annoy me.
Welcome to the forum AzrexDesign. |
Haha i see your point but its for my OCR national ICT qualification 
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jerryb4417
Joined: 20 Dec 2008
Posts: 710
Location: Oklahoma
PS Version: photoshop cs5
OS: win7 pro 64 bit, i7-3.2g, GTS 450,
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hi,
I sort of likeit... everything the mood...
darkand forboding ... your got dark armored guy with a gun ready to do battle
theobjects behind the text are broken and the text with the lines.... sort of disconnected again things are broken should sort of set the modd of the viewer when he goes in....
the only thing i had trouble with is that last character in the word couldn't make that out.... don't know if thaqt is important or not .... but just something i noticed and tried tofigure out...
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Auieos
Joined: 29 Jan 2010
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I have a prejudice against robots so imho I think it would look better without the robot.
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thehermit
Joined: 05 Mar 2003
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Location: Cheltenham, UK
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| Quote: | | I have a prejudice against robots |
Whole family wiped out by the automatons?
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hytham
Joined: 17 Nov 2011
Posts: 37
Location: 64
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I liked the idea..the crashed glass i nice..i think text and the robot need some brightness.
anyway good job :-)
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Skyhawk
Joined: 28 Oct 2011
Posts: 48
Location: New York City, USA
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| Posted: Mon Dec 12, 2011 1:26 pm Post subject: Re: Opinions on this being my website entrance ? |
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| AzrexDesign wrote: | Could all you guys tell me what you think of this please ?  |
The robot image is slamming cool, but you might want to add more action to the background so it would not appear too sterile.
Otherwise you're good to go. Good luck with the OCR national ICT rating. 
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caveman
Joined: 12 Dec 2011
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Location: UK
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Looks really good, though I couldn't make it out as a gun so perhaps brighten that part up.
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Skyhawk
Joined: 28 Oct 2011
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Location: New York City, USA
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My philosophy has always been that as long as you are satisfy with your work, then go with it and that satisfaction will translate into your work. 
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