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kevino_17
Joined: 11 Aug 2010
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Location: London
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hawkeye
Joined: 14 May 2009
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Location: Mesa, Az
OS: Windows 7 Pro 64 bit
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Looks good overall, although I'm not sure I like what you did to the eyes. You might consider straightening her mouth:
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Auieos
Joined: 29 Jan 2010
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I like.
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tezdread
Joined: 29 Aug 2010
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Hey kevino, think you've done a great job on the skin, looks very realistic. I agree with hawkeye about the eyes, they don't look natural so a little less effect here would be better and also think the lips could be slightly less glossy but only very slightly.
Looks great with the lips being straighten too 
All better than I could do!
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j_kingdon1
Joined: 09 Sep 2010
Posts: 2
Location: North Carolina, USA
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looks great, might try curving the peaks on the upper lip a little they look extremely sharp to be natural, the eyes like everyone else said, pull the iris's color all the way to the pupil, maybe add a slight gold flake in them as well and widen the base of the nose just a touch, looks a little small for how thick the bridge is...
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