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bladecx321
Joined: 27 Jun 2010
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Location: New Hampshire
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 Posted: Mon Jun 28, 2010 11:35 pm Post subject: Please Critique my Typography |
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Hey everyone! I threw the following together tonight. I really liked the lyrics. I wanted them to seem kind of bold, and I clearly wanted "burn" and "hurts" to stand out. Nor did I really know how to "decorate" the work. I'm interested in critiques of the whole project, as well as maybe some general ideas on how to make specific parts of the text stand out - not necessarily for this project, but general tips that I can use for future typographic work.
>>HERE<< is the piece, entitled "Watch Me Burn" inspired by Eminem's 'Love the Way You Lie.'
**(For those of you new to deviantART, click on the image to enlarge, and download (on the right side) for full resolution view).
I'm looking forward to hearing your comments and critique!
-Ryan
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Patrick
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egzon41
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its very interesting and creative > great
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bladecx321
Joined: 27 Jun 2010
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Location: New Hampshire
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Patrick: There's really no symbolism with the fact that it's an RSS symbol. I just needed something to fill the space, and I wanted to decorate opposite corners. I thought that a design something like that would look nice, found that in my brushes, and used it. Other than that, not really any meaning haha
egzon41: thank you! 
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egzon41
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| Posted: Tue Jun 29, 2010 2:39 pm Post subject: |
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you are welcome bladecx321
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