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jk3000
Joined: 16 Apr 2009
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 Posted: Mon Jun 28, 2010 12:13 am Post subject: Rate My Wallpaper |
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hawkeye
Joined: 14 May 2009
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Location: Mesa, Az
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Too static, nothing creative about. As it is, it just looks like you just scanned some sports cards together. I'd say this should just be your starting point, not the finish.
IMO-It would look better if you blended the images into each other, altered the sizes, background, text, etc.
Google sports posters to get some ideas. |
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jk3000
Joined: 16 Apr 2009
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Haha " nothing creative about it" now I find that kind of out there. To make "sport cards" you need to be creative...........But thank you for your opinion.......It would of been easy to blend everything together..what I was trying to achieve 2 separate layers coming together as one. Come on!!!!!!
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bladecx321
Joined: 27 Jun 2010
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Location: New Hampshire
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What I like:
I like how you kept the same color style throughout your image, and the silver texts goes nicely with the blue background.
What to work on:
I think as hawkeye said, it would be good if you varied image sizes and blended them. The tiled effect is interesting, but it is quite static and it doesn't really bring my eye around the image. >>This<< is what I'm talking about. It's kind of busy and hurts my eyes a bit, but that's more of the idea. Notice how there's many different sizes as well as the images are blended. Also, make sure you keep your people proportional - the bottom right image looks 'squished.'
Hope this helps!
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jk3000
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lol..... Guys I am totally against blending everything together on the same opacity; I like having the men standout....My question us did either one of you set it as a wallpaper? |
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bladecx321
Joined: 27 Jun 2010
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Okay well, you should work on making it more of one image, whereas this is more of 6 different images. And no I didn't for a few reasons
1. not my screen res
2. im not one for sports
3. im using my own wallpaper 
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myphotos
Joined: 09 Jun 2010
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Not too bad. It will work.
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jk3000
Joined: 16 Apr 2009
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I think me leaving the men less blended was my attempt of lighting? Guys this is supposed to be a critiqued and now im being an..... |
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jk3000
Joined: 16 Apr 2009
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Hey if you want to give feeed back at lease give The Artist some due and set it as a bg...omg ..It takes less than a min to do so.... |
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bladecx321
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