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egzon41
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 Posted: Tue Jun 22, 2010 1:02 am Post subject: design a sport player |
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i designed cristiano ronaldo and im new on ps so i want a co0mment from you about my work. Your advice will make me more pleasure and professional in my way of working on photoshop
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bladecx321
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What I Like:
I like the design and the colors. I also like the way you "cascaded" the text 'renaldo.' Also, your composition is nice!
What to work on:
One change i think would be nice is if you had the noise over the whole image, but decreasing as it moves away from the body. An example of this would be in the upper left corner.
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egzon41
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thank you very much bladecx321 
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jk3000
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| bladecx321 wrote: | What I Like:
I like the design and the colors. I also like the way you "cascaded" the text 'renaldo.' Also, your composition is nice!
What to work on:
One change i think would be nice is if you had the noise over the whole image, but decreasing as it moves away from the body. An example of this would be in the upper left corner. |
very fair assessment I completely agree
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egzon41
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| Posted: Tue Jun 29, 2010 3:04 am Post subject: |
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aan another guy wrote me that
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There needs to be more dynamism in them, they are after all sports stars, the text effect is a bit too distracting and finally, I would have masked him out from the colours. The colours are good though and reminiscent of Barcelona's.
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egzon41
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ok thanks
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Hi egzon, I think you need more focus on the face really and not have as much opacity in it. Also the layer with the Real Madrid badge could be cut down a bit, by this.. I mean remove the white around the badge.
Good start though
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egzon41
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| Posted: Sat Jul 03, 2010 12:17 pm Post subject: |
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thank you for your reply. i'm pleased for telling me that. i will do that what you and some other think
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