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Nick_B

Joined: 23 Jan 2010
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PostPosted: Sat Jan 23, 2010 2:06 pm    Post subject: Band art Reply with quote

Hey,
I did my first design for my band. I wanted to use something cartoon-ish like.
So this is what I came up with it, dunno if there are any metal fans here :p
The band name is drawn with a Wacom Pen tablet, so it's 100% custom , no font used.
Tell me what you guys think, I think there is still something missing but can't quite figure what more I should add really, if you have any ideas please share! ^^
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thehermit

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Location: Cheltenham, UK


PostPosted: Sat Jan 23, 2010 3:14 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

Not sure what the band name is, abysfall? Other than that I really like the art, a little cliched with the skeletal arm coming out but overall good work inmo.
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Nick_B

Joined: 23 Jan 2010
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PostPosted: Sat Jan 23, 2010 4:27 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

Hehe, yeah AbyssFall, I know it's a weird name, but then again we are a weird band :p
Here's what I added to the design.


The blood looks kinda off, but I don't know, I'm not good with blood :p
Feel free to add some stuff yourself if you have a better idea.
=)
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pixel8or

Joined: 31 Oct 2009
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Location: Ireland


PostPosted: Sun Jan 24, 2010 9:01 am    Post subject: Reply with quote

I like it, the artwork certainly goes well with the type of music you guys make. There are two things I would change, either do the band name in another colour or clean up some of those black lines and dots around it as it is difficult to read. It just needs something done to it so it stands out from the background more. The blood at the bottom is quite interesting, it is on both the hands and what seems like floating in free space. I would make a decision as to whether the blood is going on the hands and arms and not floating in free space or put it floating on free space and behind the hands/arms. Is AbyssFall one word or two words?
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seaco

Joined: 31 Dec 2009
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PostPosted: Thu Jan 28, 2010 5:40 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

I think that due to you having an unusual name then it has to be a little easier to read but I understand you still want it manic so I've cleaned it a little, maybe something like this?


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pixel8or

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PostPosted: Fri Jan 29, 2010 2:35 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

Or what about the two hands holding the word(s) abyssfall between them? Or the two hands holding the tails of two letters tightly as the word(s) abyssfall is trying to escape the clutches of whatever is coming out the earth? Some type of interaction between all the elements might look good.
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