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monagram
Joined: 18 Aug 2009
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 Posted: Sun Aug 23, 2009 8:05 pm Post subject: give us some feedback please people! |
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i was thinking that it needed text, what do you guys reckon?
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Kennection
Joined: 29 Jul 2009
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| Posted: Sat Sep 05, 2009 3:24 pm Post subject: |
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It's not bad. Definitely interesting. I'd tone down a bit on the outer glow of the subject. Not too sure about the barcode, but I'm not really digging it. Also, I'd say possibly make the clouds a little more subtle? They seem too bold and too attention grabbing, when the focus should be on the subject mostly I'd say.
But this is my opinion.
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MrBosnia
Joined: 27 Sep 2009
Posts: 3
Location: California
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| Posted: Sun Sep 27, 2009 11:29 pm Post subject: |
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Indeed there is a bit of conflict of colors here. I recommend removing the bar code completely, and either making the clouds a lot more subtler as Kennection has advised, or perhaps even getting a new texture for them. Try using something darker and metallic that compliments the overall image for the clouds.
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raz50
Joined: 23 Sep 2009
Posts: 33
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| Posted: Wed Sep 30, 2009 7:19 am Post subject: |
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I'd say darken or reduce the clouds layer. I like your design though.
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