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yachtpicasso
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hey guys, i wanted your advice on something that i was working on.... basically i wanted to create a writing made out of a tree or leaves. i couldnt find a tutorial of what i wanted to do... so i tried real hard and i came out with this.
there are 2 letters C O but i really dont like how it came out. the other pic is me trying to add some spice to it, by adding layers and more textures to it.
but its a FAIL in general.
how could i improve!?
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hawkeye
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I'd add a little more spacing. Then add some additional letters to get a better idea of how it will look.
I think you're on the right track, myself.
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yachtpicasso
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since you put it that way... i wil continue with it... you were just what i needed!
THANKS!
i'll keep adding on the post.
do you suggest to keep it simple or liven it up a bit??
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hawkeye
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I like what you've done so far. I prefer simple over complex, but that's just me.
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yachtpicasso
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| Posted: Tue Jul 07, 2009 4:40 pm Post subject: |
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i added 2 new letters.... and made the image bigger for you to see.
still think i should go on?
it looks so basic though! 
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hawkeye
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I do. I think it's very creative.
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yachtpicasso
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ok... done... the word is CONTINUITY ... but i now see after finishing it, that it doesnt quite go with what i was looking for.
looks a bit bland and repetitive dont it!?
nonetheless it could come in handy for future work. although, i would really appreciate how you guys would improve in making this look much better and more "surreal".
maybe if i added this sort of effect with a perspective distance!?
maybe the shadding will add some more "humph" to it!!!
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Patrick
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yachtpicasso
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when you guys mean spacing ... what do you mean?
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I think it's creative. I think, like he said, maybe some more spacing and definition would be helpful, especially on some of the characters, like the N and I. Cool stuff. 
