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MrPhotoXpert
Joined: 09 May 2009
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Location: Canada, Ontario, Timmins
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 Posted: Mon May 18, 2009 8:59 am Post subject: Review this! |
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Hi there, I would like for you guys to rate and comment on how I could improve on this image. This logo was intended for a banner.
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JSnell
Joined: 11 Oct 2008
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Location: Florida, USA
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I don't like how the text transitions in color. It's a good idea, just it doesn't look like a transition, I think it should fade into the color, you know? I also don't like those two colors. My input 
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iDad
Joined: 22 Feb 2009
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OS: iMac 24" 1TB harddrive OS10.5.6
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| Posted: Mon May 18, 2009 9:13 am Post subject: |
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I would change the color of glow on text to match glow of star and a wee bit more tranparent and maybe a frame or a planet far off also
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MrPhotoXpert
Joined: 09 May 2009
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Thanks for the advice guys! I just gotta wait and see what the client says. Then I will go from there. I don't think I put enough scale between colors on the name gradient like JSnell said. As for the glow I will see about that. As for the planet i'm not to sure what your trying to say. I would like to change these but like said, I will wait to see what the client says.
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iDad
Joined: 22 Feb 2009
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no biggie, I think you did a fine job the planet idea probably over kill anyway but I was thinking something like this real quick
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