Posted: Thu May 14, 2009 4:40 pm Post subject: My Friends promotion noob business!
So a friend of mine, has just ventured out into a new career and asked for my help regarding advertising, I accepted, Baring in mind im self taught and have been dabbling in photoshop for around 3 months now
This was the final result
I just wanted "the real critics" opinions!
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Posted: Fri May 15, 2009 11:33 am Post subject:
Hey kyenoone,
Thanks for sharing. Here are some details I would look to adjust:
The space between PRESEN and TS on the tape.
I noticed you had used commas in other parts, so I would add a comma to ITS in "ITS JUNK."
The edges of both the guitar and the girl are a little rough. It might help to shrink them a bit.
The guitar itself appears a bit blurrier than the rest of the image. Shrinking could help with this, as well.
I would set the prices so that they align to the right. The top price sticks out a little bit farther than the others. Maybe even drag that area and the PRETTY IN PUNK test and associated text up a bit so that the prices don't bump into her hair.
The text that wraps the guitar is too hard to read as is the blue URL text on the guitar. Maybe find somewhere else for them or add a black border to the bottom of the ad where they can be plainly and quickly read.
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Here are some details I would look to adjust:
