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Hackles
Joined: 15 Apr 2009
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Location: NZ
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 Posted: Wed Apr 15, 2009 1:22 am Post subject: I need a bit of critique here |
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Hey guys, so I came up with this design.
I think it's a pretty okay effort for a first time at this kind of 'style', but anyway, I was looking for some comments on some things I can work on, or different ways to do things etc. |
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Patrick
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| Posted: Wed Apr 15, 2009 10:16 am Post subject: |
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Hackles
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| Posted: Wed Apr 15, 2009 2:31 pm Post subject: |
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Well I was trying to make the effect of an explosion in between the moon and earth, but I didn't really know much about how I could could do it well. |
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Patrick
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Kryn
Joined: 07 May 2009
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| Posted: Thu May 07, 2009 4:33 am Post subject: |
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Great concept.
Work towards making the physical side of the image more realistic, such as the "flames", they're a little static and bulky instead of explosive and "whippy".
With a bit more work you've got quite the interesting piece on your hands, good work.
Edit: Oh and take that blueish-sharpish-random thingy in the middle of the image to the wall at the back of your house and put a gun to its head.
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It certainly looks interesting. What sort of thing were you going for? What was the aim?
hehe. One thing I like about the image is if you stare at the center, between the two planets... you can almost see things. Like a skull or a face, etc.
