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nitratez
Joined: 04 Aug 2006
Posts: 20
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 Posted: Mon Aug 07, 2006 9:11 pm Post subject: made new background pic |
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malcon
Joined: 23 Feb 2005
Posts: 391
Location: miami florida
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Whats up man. this looks clean. its hard to review.
what is it for?
what are you trying to say with this?
why did you pick the colors? what does this stand for?
maybe just give some more details about the piece..
as far as a strictly layout review. I think it is a bit off balance. the text and the wavey design being on the same side really makes the eye stay on that side. i think you could make it work by removing the text (then your eye would flow along the wavey. tenticle-like design into the lighter backgroun gradient.) or give the gradient in the background more contrast.
right now when i look at it, my eyes starts at the bottom right and follows your cool design up all the way to the end of the line, but then i go right to the text and back down...i feel like i should be looking to the top left...not back to the right.
anyway i hope this helps some. but i think you should give some more insite on the piece you want reviewed. it will help us understand why you did what you did.
cool texture on the tenticles...its very denum-like
-malcon
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