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Zenoah
Joined: 10 Jul 2006
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 Posted: Mon Jul 10, 2006 1:01 pm Post subject: New pic |
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I was just wondering what you guys thought about this new pic i photshopped, Constructive Criticism welcome!
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Haunus
Joined: 24 Nov 2004
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| Posted: Mon Jul 10, 2006 1:04 pm Post subject: |
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its nice, heavy use of the wind effect I see  |
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Zenoah
Joined: 10 Jul 2006
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| Posted: Mon Jul 10, 2006 1:05 pm Post subject: |
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yeah i was kind of forced into that, the cloud brush i was using sucked hardcore, so i had to Wind the heck out of it. |
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Haunus
Joined: 24 Nov 2004
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| Posted: Mon Jul 10, 2006 1:11 pm Post subject: |
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I see, well nice pic all the same, good job. |
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malcon
Joined: 23 Feb 2005
Posts: 391
Location: miami florida
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| Posted: Mon Jul 10, 2006 8:52 pm Post subject: |
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i like it.
a few things you may want to consider.
the text is a bit crowded, and i dont really understand why the two sets of text are so far away. the focal point tends to get drawn to the lens flair and seems less important than the figure.
the figure is really over exposed and i think it looks cool. it makes the light look more powerfull
so yeah i think everything is good except the text. the type doesnt really fit.. it could just be the color and placment. i would say rethink the text.
looks good!
keep it up! |
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Zenoah
Joined: 10 Jul 2006
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| Posted: Wed Jul 12, 2006 9:02 am Post subject: |
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thanks for your ideas, im going to go tinker with it and see if i can get a more fitting text |
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