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Haunus
Joined: 24 Nov 2004
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 Posted: Thu Jul 06, 2006 9:55 pm Post subject: quick banner |
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had a very beautiful person to make one of, sO I went ahead:
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malcon
Joined: 23 Feb 2005
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Location: miami florida
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its an ok compasition, i like the filters used, aswell as the colors. i think you should do somthing to make the text not get lost in the picture...and i also think the compositing of the blue and white images could be better. the fade on the edge just seems a little strange. i say this is good but could be better.
keep up the awesome work Haunus.
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Haunus
Joined: 24 Nov 2004
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| Posted: Fri Jul 07, 2006 12:28 pm Post subject: |
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| malcon wrote: | its an ok compasition, i like the filters used, aswell as the colors. i think you should do somthing to make the text not get lost in the picture...and i also think the compositing of the blue and white images could be better. the fade on the edge just seems a little strange. i say this is good but could be better.
keep up the awesome work Haunus. |
would you be able to elaborate? |
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malcon
Joined: 23 Feb 2005
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Location: miami florida
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| Posted: Fri Jul 07, 2006 9:51 pm Post subject: |
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yeah man, ok
i like the colors , very cool and not overwhelming. i think the text gets lost with the image under it. maybe a glow or somthing to seperate the letting a little more from the girls hair etc. the name is just a little to hard to read.
the image to the far right (the blue one) and the white one next to it i thounk could be better put together. maybe if the edge of the blue image is more flowing with the contour. its to abrupt.
anyway i hope thats a little more clear. it looks good, but like i said i think it could be even better.
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Haunus
Joined: 24 Nov 2004
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| Posted: Sat Jul 08, 2006 7:28 am Post subject: |
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oh, ok, I can do all of that, except the last one, have no clue how i'd go about that. |
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Zenoah
Joined: 10 Jul 2006
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| Posted: Mon Jul 10, 2006 1:07 pm Post subject: |
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Im pretty much in agreement with what everyone else said, the only real problem i see is the text getting caught up in the image below, other then that its fantastic. |
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Haunus
Joined: 24 Nov 2004
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| Posted: Mon Jul 10, 2006 1:09 pm Post subject: |
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thanks, and I will work on it next time  |
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