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Star
Joined: 07 Jun 2006
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 Posted: Wed Jun 07, 2006 4:07 am Post subject: plz Review my first siggy |
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Hi all,
I just found your site today. I got photoshop cs2 a week ago and started learning photoshop from some tutorials.
My good friend needed a new sig so I decided to try and make him one.
This is my first sig and would like to get feedback on it. Thanks for your time. 
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Haunus
Joined: 24 Nov 2004
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| Posted: Wed Jun 07, 2006 4:14 am Post subject: |
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goood job, some nitpciking, why did you use green? its not bad, green just seems kind of off for the subject matter, a brighter "FunnieR" color might have been more appropriate, but good job. |
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Star
Joined: 07 Jun 2006
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| Posted: Wed Jun 07, 2006 10:48 am Post subject: |
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hehe np, I accept all types of comments on any of my work. That is how I can improve.
Anyway, the reason I chose green is cause that is my good friend's favorite color and I was making him the sig. I am not a fan of the cartoon.
What color would you have used? |
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Haunus
Joined: 24 Nov 2004
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| Posted: Wed Jun 07, 2006 11:18 am Post subject: |
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| Star wrote: | hehe np, I accept all types of comments on any of my work. That is how I can improve.
Anyway, the reason I chose green is cause that is my good friend's favorite color and I was making him the sig. I am not a fan of the cartoon.
What color would you have used? |
I am not either, I would just have used a color or combination that accentuated the cartoony or silly feel of it, a brighter color, maybe yellow and orange or something. |
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Star
Joined: 07 Jun 2006
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| Posted: Fri Jun 09, 2006 8:42 am Post subject: |
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TY haunus for your comments
Any other suggestions for improvement? |
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Haunus
Joined: 24 Nov 2004
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| Posted: Fri Jun 09, 2006 7:56 pm Post subject: |
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nope, I suppose after seeing that mouth move for 5 minutes it might get annoying, but thats all.  |
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grannygeek
Joined: 23 Feb 2006
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Location: Pennsylvania
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| Posted: Wed Jun 14, 2006 6:26 am Post subject: |
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I can see part of the other frame when it moves..You must have not turned that one off, when you make the frames..
Maybe mixing an eye movement between this movement would make it more interesting, and play with the timing..
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conor13
Joined: 14 Jun 2006
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| Posted: Wed Jun 14, 2006 1:52 pm Post subject: |
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first timer i think it looks good it will take me about a month until ill be able to make ones half that good when i get photo shop
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GTOwns
Joined: 01 Aug 2006
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i'm sorry and dont mean to critisize like no-one has before but,
the green bg doesn't fit, the border almost killed it, and text might need some help, plus maybe the best way to go with it is to not do animation but choose out a decent render and go with that |
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malcon
Joined: 23 Feb 2005
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Location: miami florida
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| Posted: Wed Aug 02, 2006 10:28 am Post subject: |
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| Haunus wrote: | | Star wrote: | hehe np, I accept all types of comments on any of my work. That is how I can improve.
Anyway, the reason I chose green is cause that is my good friend's favorite color and I was making him the sig. I am not a fan of the cartoon.
What color would you have used? |
I am not either, I would just have used a color or combination that accentuated the cartoony or silly feel of it, a brighter color, maybe yellow and orange or something. |
i agree. personally i would use the red thats in the logo (hunger)
anyway its a decent sig. there isnt to much to say other than a few little things. i think you should check the highlight color on the bevel that you used on the border of the sig. at the top its like a white/yellow color. and maybe try fading in the glow on the inside of the border a little more.. maybe play with the size, and range sliders.
Last but not leaste. the text and the bottom right seems a little cramped. i dont think you need it there. i think it is way to close to the hunger force logo.
other than that its an ok sig. i say that because there really isnt to much going on. cool though
keep it up man. and welcom to the site!
-malcon |
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