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Gallo_Pinto
Joined: 15 Jul 2005
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Location: BC, Canada
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 Posted: Mon Feb 20, 2006 2:36 am Post subject: Photos. |
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http://trempel.rbsstech.com/traditional/print&photo/Docks/Docks.htm
yes, that is my website, No it's not done. i fear it may never be done. sometimes I feel the design isn't good enough to warrant continuing to update it.
Anyway, please take a look at the photos and tell me what you think. Don't worry if your crit is harsh, I'm not goign to be offended, I just want to make my work as good as I can.
thanks.[/url]
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Moi
Joined: 21 Mar 2005
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nice photography,
but the images seem a little cluttered or whatever the word is and
there's no real focus point.
photo 1 is nice with the plants and tree branches to the right side it sorta frames it, but the wooden fence kinda breaks the image down, it would have been great if you could get more of the water in the background.
Make it more open so to speak.
i like the second photo most. 
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Gallo_Pinto
Joined: 15 Jul 2005
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I agree that the fence dominates a bit...
I have another one taken from farther up the path. I'll see if I can do anything with it.
thanks for the response 
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