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ronmatt
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Location: paradise, Ca
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malcon
Joined: 23 Feb 2005
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Location: miami florida
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i like that. it seems that the ship is a little to sharp in comparison to the planet. also blue afterburners seem like maybe they should fade a little more throughout instead of being completly solid then the right at the end they fade. but im not trying to tell you wahts wrong im just offering suggestions. that may be exactly how you wanted it you know. good job though keep up the good work
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ronmatt
Joined: 30 Jun 2005
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Location: paradise, Ca
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| Posted: Sun Oct 16, 2005 2:34 am Post subject: |
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the sharpness of the ship is about what I wanted. Sort of a photographic depth of field thing. I wanted the attention to be on the ship. As for the (flames) you're right. I made the ship separately on a transp. background then placed it into the space scene. the transluscency didn't work as planned.
Thanks.
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Moi
Joined: 21 Mar 2005
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that's very well done, i like the space ship especially! 
boatscene
crazy alien terrain
i just can't seem to get enough detail into it 
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teddc
Joined: 04 Oct 2004
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Location: Belmont North Australia
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I realy like alien terrain, althouh the 'jellyfish's' tentacles look a bit static.
The colours work well although some of the elements are a little out of balance.
It may be have a better composition with the jellyfish removed.
Then I would consider hanging it on my wall.
only MHO
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malcon
Joined: 23 Feb 2005
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Location: miami florida
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| Posted: Sun Oct 16, 2005 6:17 pm Post subject: |
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very cool. i like your style on the boat scene. i like the alien terrain picture too. i saw that you said you cant seem to get enough detail. try smaller sharper brushes with more contrast. I have the same problem alot. but maybe that will help. try using the burn, and dodge tool to creat more shadows/highlights. i am a new fan of those two tools haha. anyway looks good though keep up the good work
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Moi
Joined: 21 Mar 2005
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thx for the comment malcon and teddc
i will try some different techniques!
and teddc: you are right about the jelly fish thing!
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malcon
Joined: 23 Feb 2005
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Location: miami florida
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haha here is somthing i did rather quickly for a character design assignment. kinda funny...
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Moi
Joined: 21 Mar 2005
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lol malcon that's funny.
and looks good! 
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malcon
Joined: 23 Feb 2005
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Location: miami florida
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haha thanks man.
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