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def1

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PostPosted: Fri Jun 17, 2005 5:34 pm    Post subject: cd cover Reply with quote

did a sample cd cover



any thoughts?
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PostPosted: Sat Jun 18, 2005 8:30 am    Post subject: Reply with quote

It's interesting. :)

Maybe move the big logo to the right so that the y tail isn't hitting that guy in the head.

The small text is hard to read. I would put it all on one line, too (so you probably have to change the font). Living all by itself looks kind of strange and probably isn't the best use of space.

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PostPosted: Sat Jun 18, 2005 9:21 am    Post subject: Reply with quote

The image is okay, but the typography is terrible. More than one or two swash capitals on a page is almost always a no-no. It's especially bad when two of them are identical, such as the Bs in "Becomes Better". And yes, the text at the bottom should either all be on one line, or distributed evenly between two, like "When Death Becomes / Better Than Living." Also, the descender on the "y" in "Atreyu" looks like it's smacking the guy in the side of the head.
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PostPosted: Sat Jun 18, 2005 12:19 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

When letters attack!
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