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def1
Joined: 30 Apr 2005
Posts: 223
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 Posted: Mon Jun 13, 2005 10:06 pm Post subject: Please review |
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some one told me to fic up this picture
heres what i came up with
thoughts please |
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Proprius
Joined: 28 Feb 2005
Posts: 137
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| Posted: Mon Jun 13, 2005 11:32 pm Post subject: |
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The blurred shadow underneath looks a little weird, and I'm not entirely sure why, but it doesn't look quite right regardless of that. |
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Xopods
Joined: 19 Apr 2005
Posts: 96
Location: Montreal, Quebec
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| Posted: Tue Jun 14, 2005 6:48 am Post subject: |
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The shadow is awful, I agree. You've got the same thing in one of the sigs you posted. That kind of shadow is a technique I think you should "unlearn." Drop shadows are pretty much always cheesy - to get away with it at all, it had better be done right.
Other than that, the big problem is with the isolation work; you didn't cut out the whole tires. They're both way too thin, particularly the back one. It looks like the car is running on bicycle tires.
/Alex |
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