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Moi
Joined: 21 Mar 2005
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 Posted: Sun Apr 24, 2005 2:03 pm Post subject: simple banner |
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Haunus
Joined: 24 Nov 2004
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| Posted: Mon Apr 25, 2005 3:21 am Post subject: |
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whatever you did with the text was probally intentional but I dont like it, however the rest of it is very nice. |
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Moi
Joined: 21 Mar 2005
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| Posted: Mon Apr 25, 2005 2:41 pm Post subject: |
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well yep what i did with the text was intentional 
i like that effect very much actually  i like this banner very much and i was wondering am i gone blind or is it pretty oke?? 
if not let me know, cause i would be making a big fool of myself, kinda like a blind guy not knowing his pants is down or somethin like that!
*if any blind person reads this and is offended or hurt by it, i would like to offer my most sencere apologies* |
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Haunus
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| Posted: Mon Apr 25, 2005 7:03 pm Post subject: |
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*if any blind person reads this and is offended or hurt by it, i would like to offer my most sencere apologies* |
how exactly does a blind person read it? |
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Moi
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hehe didn't think anybody would get into this  |
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teddc
Joined: 04 Oct 2004
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Location: Belmont North Australia
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I have a blind friend who uses a Braille screen
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WHAT WOULD VAN GOUGH HAVE DONE WITH PHOTOSHOP |
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Haunus
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| Posted: Tue Apr 26, 2005 3:11 am Post subject: |
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| teddc wrote: | | I have a blind friend who uses a Braille screen |
thats awsome  |
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Moi
Joined: 21 Mar 2005
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| Posted: Tue Apr 26, 2005 5:53 am Post subject: |
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Yeah that's great, i didn't know something like that existed!
amazing!
btw sorry for the stupid joke! |
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Xopods
Joined: 19 Apr 2005
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Location: Montreal, Quebec
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Looks good overall. Nice colour scheme, and I do like the text, although the whole circuitry look has been done to death. I have a couple of suggestions to make.
Did you skew or distort the pistol? It doesn't look right. I know you're trying to add perspective, but skew/distort really only works on flat objects. Try to find a picture of a gun from the correct angle, or redesign the banner so you can use the one you've got in its original form. I'm also not sure it needs the motion blur.
The text needs some kind of alignment, because right now it's just floating. Likewise the animated keyboard. To quote Robin Williams (the designer, not the actor): "Nothing should be placed on the page arbitrarily." I'd either stick the text all the way down in the bottom right and the keyboard in the top right, or else add some kind of strong visual line to align your elements against. For instance, maybe if the barrel of the pistol was horizontal and aligned with the top of the picture, which in turn lined up with one of stronger lines of the circuitry, you'd have a sort of "visual clothesline" to hang your text from.
/Alex |
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Moi
Joined: 21 Mar 2005
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| Posted: Tue Apr 26, 2005 4:22 pm Post subject: |
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thank you very much for your advice xopods!
although i'm not planning to redo the banner since its not going to be used
for anything, you have given some very helpful advice, wich i will think of next time i make something!
thx |
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