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malcon
Joined: 23 Feb 2005
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Location: miami florida
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ok im about 75 percent done with this. i think one of my favorite parts is the guy in the back on the cell phone and the led scrolling sign on the side! anyway its not perfect or complete. but what do you think?
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malcon
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cyborg
Joined: 12 Oct 2004
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Location: canada
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thats kinda neat....but i dont personally like it....it just seems too messy to me
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witam
Joined: 27 Oct 2004
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Location: Belgium
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Mhh... looking at it in detail:
The lights behind the window (behind the guy with the led) is very blurry.. all the other light trails are defined, so that looks wrong.
Secondly you have smudge away the black area in that window.. which is the inside of the car above the door at the other side
Also you seem to have a part between the two doors at the other side of the car (the white line) but you don't have it at this side.
Do yo see where the red reflection on teh road is of the taillights? It's where the lights are, the green reflection seems to come way after the lights.. doesn't make sense to have such a difference in reflection.
As you indicate with the lines you used to identify the doors, there is a curve in metal there, yet your letters don't follow this curve (the big Taxi.com i mean)
The bumper extension is a bit blurry and lacks the texture the rest of the bumper has. (in the back)
The removing of the wheels has been done well, i like what you did with the taillights, the window in front and the steering post. It's a good concept.. i'd like to see the finished image, where all of the above is fixed..
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malcon
Joined: 23 Feb 2005
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Location: miami florida
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