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tooni
Joined: 31 Jan 2012
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 Posted: Tue Jan 31, 2012 9:11 am Post subject: Photoshop project |
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I need reviews to improve my work . What you think ??
Last edited by tooni on Wed Feb 01, 2012 4:34 am; edited 1 time in total |
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thehermit
Joined: 05 Mar 2003
Posts: 3987
Location: Cheltenham, UK
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Welcome to the forum. What sort of motivation/vibe, were you aiming for?
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tooni
Joined: 31 Jan 2012
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| Posted: Tue Jan 31, 2012 4:57 pm Post subject: |
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Thank you very much. The photo is made for a good friend if you can see its a girl she wanted a unique photo and that is the result and now i want to know what others think |
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jerryb4417
Joined: 20 Dec 2008
Posts: 710
Location: Oklahoma
PS Version: photoshop cs5
OS: win7 pro 64 bit, i7-3.2g, GTS 450,
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hi,
ok it for her but how is it going to be used.... I think that what thehermit was saying.. is it going to be used as albumcover for her pictures, or as part of a website and if so her website or some else and what kind of website... or it for a family picture frame.. the application of the image give you guidlines and ideas....
now the objects should fit some of the words that used in the background..
now in general, this iconic collage... as it is... to me, and everyone has a opinion... smile....
1. the teme looks like it happinesss.. now you have a gal there in the upper right seems unhappy.... that distracts...
2. on the left , not sure that black and white works well ... also I think instead of the bottom a straight line I would put in maybe curve faded bottom...
3. the gal with the horns... ilike that one...
4. the green cookie monster not sure if that works well in the image... possibly using a couple of cartoon characters might work out... for example... micky mouse and mini together or mini fondling over micky and embarrising....
5. now if this for her picture album i would use picture that are of her... and maybe modify them to fit the background words... and maybe some cute cartoon picture that i mentioned above...
6. not sure if that gal with the ball of lightening works.. how about a gal that uses a magic wand instead of lightening ...
any way those are some of my thoughts... hesitant to saying more since don't really know how it going to be used..... something like this can be very personell or not... |
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tooni
Joined: 31 Jan 2012
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| Posted: Wed Feb 01, 2012 4:44 am Post subject: |
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sorry for the stupid describe but yes it is a collage but my english is not so good .
ok jerryb i think i know what you mead and i try to use your advice for the next time ...... and she have a stuffed animal that looks like the green cookie monster |
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jerryb4417
Joined: 20 Dec 2008
Posts: 710
Location: Oklahoma
PS Version: photoshop cs5
OS: win7 pro 64 bit, i7-3.2g, GTS 450,
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hi,
oh ok she a stuff anmal then that ok since it has meaning.. |
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