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raz50
Joined: 23 Sep 2009
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 Posted: Fri Oct 09, 2009 10:23 am Post subject: Participating in a contest |
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For a game i've decided to enter a contest. in the game everyone has a cave that you can upgrade. those are standard upgrades like chairs and a table.
the moderators don't have a cave and they made a contest out of it. Design a moderators cave.
The first pic shows the empty cave everyone starts with. The second is my attempt. Comparing to the other sendings (on voting based) i think i may have a chance. To improve my chances it's not too bad to ask you guys for input. (Grot is Cave in Dutch).
what do you all think?
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hawkeye
Joined: 14 May 2009
Posts: 2377
Location: Mesa, Az
OS: Windows 7 Pro 64 bit
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Looks pretty good. You might consider: make the carpet, and poles lighter towards the entrance and darker as they recede farther into the cave away from the light source. Shadows on the poles would fall directly opposite the light source in the cave opening. |
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raz50
Joined: 23 Sep 2009
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| Posted: Fri Oct 09, 2009 12:54 pm Post subject: |
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good one, thanks!
The light on the poles (and the foots) didn't disturb me. The shadows on the nearest 2 poles can come from the bar. Maybe just make the lighting a bit more yellowish. What do you think? |
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hawkeye
Joined: 14 May 2009
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| Posted: Fri Oct 09, 2009 12:56 pm Post subject: |
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Maybe some blackening (soot) above the torches in the cave entrance too. |
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raz50
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| Posted: Fri Oct 09, 2009 12:57 pm Post subject: |
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nice one too 
thanks! |
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Patrick
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Location: Harbinger, NC, U.S.A.
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raz50
Joined: 23 Sep 2009
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| Posted: Tue Oct 13, 2009 5:42 pm Post subject: |
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| Patrick wrote: | | Hilarious. |
is that a good thing?  |
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