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SC Photo Designs
Joined: 28 Aug 2014
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Location: United Kingdom
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 Posted: Tue Jun 02, 2015 11:49 am Post subject: My coursework |
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Hiya,
Can I have some feedback on my coursework pretty please 
Just trying to figure out how to upload multiple images |
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SC Photo Designs
Joined: 28 Aug 2014
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| Posted: Tue Jun 02, 2015 11:54 am Post subject: |
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SC Photo Designs
Joined: 28 Aug 2014
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Location: United Kingdom
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| Posted: Tue Jun 02, 2015 11:55 am Post subject: |
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I guess if you click on the link you can view the Album, not sure why the BB Code isn't working for me?
http://imgur.com/a/vGyvN |
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Iain
Joined: 19 Sep 2009
Posts: 303
Location: NZ
PS Version: CS6
OS: w7 pro 64 bit
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Hey SC. they look great, the only thing i guess i would work on would be the Hippo - lizard which looks a bit off around the head area, kinda looks like a tacked on after thought and is a bit sharp around the edges. other than that it looks like nice work.
iain |
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Patrick
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Hey SC Photo Designs,
These look good. The one thing I noticed is that the apple is sharp where the rest has a certain blurriness to it. Not sure if that was intentional. Also, the bottom of the apple looks white and it sort of stands out to me. Not sure if it's good or bad.
Regarding the BBCode, the issue is the ?1 at the end of it. You would use this instead:
| Code: | | [img]http://i.imgur.com/9wzATZG.jpg[/img] |
Thanks for sharing!
Patrick
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SC Photo Designs
Joined: 28 Aug 2014
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Location: United Kingdom
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Thanks guys, and thanks for the bbcode correction x |
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kleinski23
Joined: 24 Jul 2015
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I think I saw the concept of the majority of your works in Photoshop Top Secrets vol 1-4. |
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SC Photo Designs
Joined: 28 Aug 2014
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Location: United Kingdom
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| Posted: Sat Jul 25, 2015 1:11 am Post subject: |
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That's where I did my course well iphotoshop course |
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Enchantment
Joined: 21 Oct 2015
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I can see you've attained a certain comfort in photoshop, nicely done.
I'd have one quick criticism for you (it's subjective to some extent I must say): I think you should definitely get a more stable logo placement, and also try and make it more subtle. It comes out as grotesque in my opinion as it can take up to 20% of the picture on some of your works, and really distracts the eye from the original point of the picture, which is the artwork itself. In addition to reducing, I'd consider reducing the opacity/neutralizing the color a bit. It's merely my personal opinion, but though I'd share. |
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SC Photo Designs
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| Posted: Wed Oct 21, 2015 11:33 pm Post subject: |
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Yes "Enchantment", I agree, I will tone down the shocking pink and add an opacity overall. Thanks for your comment, I appreciate it |
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