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raz50

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PostPosted: Wed Sep 23, 2009 7:51 am    Post subject: Just a try out. Reply with quote

I wanted to turn myself in some kind of android. So i took a picture of a forest. Tried to turn it dark (the pic was at daytime). And took a cutout of myself. Then i inserted all kinds of cutouts from servers, iron statues (including one of an iron horse) and whatmore.
I wanted to create a bit of a war scene.



Please tell me what you think can be improved.
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PostPosted: Wed Sep 23, 2009 12:32 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

One immediate thing I would say that could improve it is the yellow bullet shots. Maybe have it so that some of them are partially behind the trees, etc. rather than all of them being in front of the trees.

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PostPosted: Wed Sep 23, 2009 9:19 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

Thanks Patrick. I thought about it while i drew it, but had an 'ah-what-the-heck' moment. I guess it should be better what you say.

hmm....looking at it.....i'm quite hairy.....
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PostPosted: Fri Sep 25, 2009 1:48 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

Yes, that's the part to notice. That you are hairy. Not that you have a robotic arm and insides! Big Grin Hehe.
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PostPosted: Sun Sep 27, 2009 1:34 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

Birthday Big Grin
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