Feedback Needed on flyer

Passionfruit · Posted: Tue Oct 19, 2010 5:35 pm Post subject: Feedback Needed on flyer

Hi everybody!

This is my first post here on this forum and I hope many are to come! I am 20 years old, I'm from the Netherlands and I volunteer as a graphic designer for a volunteer foundation specially for youth.

I am still very amateuristic with my designs, so I hope subscribing to this forum will contribute to making me a better photoshopper.

In a few months we will organize a party called Clubfever, with house and electro music. The DJ's are still unknown yet, but I hope you guys could give me some feedback on the flyer!

Thanks in advance.

Pascal

The flyer

[img]http://i253.photobucket.com/albums/hh56/passie90/ClubFeverII.jpg?t=1287530991[/img]

Hope you like it Big Grin

EDIT: I see now I can not link pictures here, so ill just give you guys the link: http://i253.photobucket.com/albums/hh56/passie90/ClubFeverII.jpg?t=1287530991

Auieos · Posted: Thu Oct 21, 2010 12:30 am Post subject:

Looks great, pro amateur even.

I like how you made the text stand out. One thing i would change is the font spacing between the letters. Its a bit tight in some places.

And maybe some black gradient creeping in around the edges of the background.

Anyway keep up the good work.

#1Chopper · Posted: Sun Oct 24, 2010 11:49 pm Post subject:

I agree with Auieos, looks good for an amateur. Maybe try it with bold turned off and see if that clears up the spacing problem.

3rdgear · Posted: Fri Dec 10, 2010 2:58 pm Post subject:

Looks good..

the white hurts my eyes a little but I like your style..

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