thehermit
Joined: 05 Mar 2003
Posts: 3987
Location: Cheltenham, UK
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Lose the lens flair and the coloured lens' in the type. I would focus more on a larger kingfisher/hummingbird coming out from the images.
Not overly keen on your choice of font either, I think it's Copperplate Gothic, it's not particularly designed for usage in this way, although its a personal choice.
Feel free to ignore any or all advice 
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