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Dane
Joined: 05 May 2010
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 Posted: Thu May 20, 2010 2:53 pm Post subject: Banner Tweaking |
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I would like someone to improve the banner I have created for my website. You can change anything but the Edwardian Script font for "marsh waterproofing". It's mainly the states I don't like, they don't look very clean. You can change whatever though I'll allow a little creative license |
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Auieos
Joined: 29 Jan 2010
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| Posted: Thu May 20, 2010 7:14 pm Post subject: |
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Ill give it a crack. |
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Dane
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| Posted: Fri May 21, 2010 10:28 am Post subject: |
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Thanks friend  |
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Dane
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| Posted: Fri May 21, 2010 10:46 am Post subject: |
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Oh and here's a picture of the building behind the logo if you want it |
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Auieos
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| Posted: Fri May 21, 2010 10:35 pm Post subject: |
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No worries. Hey hows work going, still lots of people over in the USA willing to part with there dollars or is everyone putting it off? If there's anything u want changed just ask. |
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Dane
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| Posted: Sat May 22, 2010 12:29 pm Post subject: |
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| Auieos wrote: | | No worries. Hey hows work going, still lots of people over in the USA willing to part with there dollars or is everyone putting it off? If there's anything u want changed just ask. |
Not sure I understand what context you're coming from? And it's looks great, I reall like the way you did the states. But the "Marsh Waterproofing" is a little hard to read. Also if you could add a little color to the states somehow that would be cool, but if you can't do that without making it look not as good don't worry about it.
Thanks so much,
Dane |
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Auieos
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| Posted: Sat May 22, 2010 6:43 pm Post subject: |
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Was just asking how your job/business has been going, the building industry has been on and off here with the GFC.
Here is the changed one, coloured states, better readability, i hope
*edit added dropshadows |
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thehermit
Joined: 05 Mar 2003
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Location: Cheltenham, UK
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Nice work
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Dane
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| Posted: Sun May 23, 2010 11:24 am Post subject: |
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Oh thank you so much! That looks 100% better than mine! And the economy isn't so great here. Fortunately for this particular company waterproofing is very essential, without it your building pretty much falls apart. |
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Dane
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| Posted: Sun May 23, 2010 11:44 am Post subject: |
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Oh and the readability is superb. It's hard to make that Edwardian Script readable I know |
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