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EtD

Joined: 17 May 2013
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Location: Australia


PostPosted: Tue Jun 18, 2013 12:53 am    Post subject: Desperately need feedback Reply with quote

The attached picture is for a school assignment and I really could use some feedback on it. The theme is grunge/graffiti, and I had to make some comment on a social issue.

The marks on the fingers are supposed to be burns, but I couldn't get them to stand out as much as I wanted to.

Any and all help would be greatly appreciated! How could I improve this?



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Auieos

Joined: 29 Jan 2010
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PostPosted: Tue Jun 18, 2013 5:51 am    Post subject: Reply with quote

Looks good but the burns look too much like black painted finger nails.
Burns are more of a reddish brown so aim for closer to that.
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coproper

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PostPosted: Wed Jun 19, 2013 11:42 am    Post subject: Reply with quote

Why is the face black/shadow? I like the idea but I dont think it really communicates what youre trying to say at the moment.. And same with the burns, i thought they were finger nails first... maybe go for somehting more simple?
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