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cyborg
Joined: 12 Oct 2004
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Location: canada
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hey guys! this is a wallpaper i made today for my cousins buddy's band Beyond Within...tell me what you think...btw i made it pretty fast so its not the best.
[edit] okay here it is
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cyborg
Joined: 12 Oct 2004
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Location: canada
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whats wrong guys??? you dont care???
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Xopods
Joined: 19 Apr 2005
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Location: Montreal, Quebec
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I quite like it. Ordinarily, I find that bevel/emboss leads to a cheesy, cheap look, but here it works. The colour scheme is good, too.
My only suggestion is to try raising the logo and the text a bit. Right now, the logo is perfectly centred, but because you have the text below and nothing above, the overall layout feels a bit bottom-heavy. The centre of gravity seems to be around the top of the central point of the W in the logo, so maybe if you aligned that with the centre of the "eye," the whole thing would feel more balanced. Or maybe not. Try it and see.
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Moi
Joined: 21 Mar 2005
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lol cyborg i'm just checking in, have a little patience 
it looks good, i like the eye chape background, very eye catching i would use it as a wallpaper!
except i don't think the text effect goes well with it tho, it's very plastic
but meaby that's just me!
Overal you get a 9,5555555 
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BryanDowning
Joined: 05 Jul 2004
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Location: California, USA
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| Posted: Mon May 30, 2005 5:00 pm Post subject: |
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I agree with Moi on the text effect. Looks too bloody for the nice mystical background.
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cyborg
Joined: 12 Oct 2004
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Location: canada
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| Posted: Tue May 31, 2005 6:13 am Post subject: |
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fair enough...and thanks for paying attention to detail....it is plastic wrap, but only on the logo...the text is a bevel, a cheap bevel i might add since i made that wallpaper with ps elements and half the layer styles are just presets that cant be edited lol.
xopods i think ill try what u suggested, it does look a bit bottom heavy. thnx
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<aazumak>
Joined: 22 Mar 2005
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Location: rhode island
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| Posted: Tue May 31, 2005 4:46 pm Post subject: |
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i like it alot, exspecially the bW in da middle
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cyborg
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| Posted: Tue May 31, 2005 6:36 pm Post subject: |
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thnx <aazumak>
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